Wish I had time for detailed comments! Like the texture, love the translucent sword blade, and the reddish and greenish hues in the sword are a nice contrast - if anything, I might push the color scheme in that direction and lose the glow-y yellows.
Otherwise, one major issue: Left forearm seems too short. Both hands should reach the same distance down the body, right? If you like, you could just cover that hand up by rotating the forearm so the shield faces front - that might actually look more natural.
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Wish I had time for detailed comments! Like the texture, love the translucent sword blade, and the reddish and greenish hues in the sword are a nice contrast - if anything, I might push the color scheme in that direction and lose the glow-y yellows.
Otherwise, one major issue: Left forearm seems too short. Both hands should reach the same distance down the body, right? If you like, you could just cover that hand up by rotating the forearm so the shield faces front - that might actually look more natural.
Oh, and good luck!
good idea mark! Me and my shields =D... Thanks for the comment!!
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